Oh yes, good thing Snowball picked up on there. When introducing 2 rabbits it should be on neutral terratory- there is lots of information on bonding rabbits on here.
Couple more things now I've had a good read through:
-You mention Myxi vaccinations but not VHD, maybe mention that too?
-When you talk about water bottles, you could say you can offer bowls as well, as some buns prefer this (mine refuse to touch a bottle now!)
-In the food bit, you mention hay is important, maybe quote the '80% of diet should be hay'. You could always ask on here for typical rabbit diets and use them as examples?
-A couple of times you mention pictures, but I can't see any...
-Maybe mention the accomodation requirements for a rabbit? This is something a lot of people don't know.
-In the exercise section, you say 'It is good to let your bunny be in their pen or in the garden for at least 1 hour'- I think it is recommended at least 4 now?
Hope you don't mind these comments! I'll let you know if I think of anything else... Looking good so far though :wave: